Here is my second draft.
This is completely different then my first draft. I flipped my whole draft one because I could not seem to add any voice to it.MY draft too sort of has a happy feel to it.
I still have a lot of editing(trial and error) things to work on.
The Dochtermann helped me the basic important thing about recording, EQ, and more.
The logic lessons helped me get the idea of recording and editing.