Susan’s Final Draft

This is my audio

Will need to turn up volume to hear the chimes in the beginning

Susan’s Final Draft

The song is called Don’t Look At Me

 

Lyrics:

Verse:
I know I am perfect
you are jealous of me
go somewhere else
don’t want to see you
Please keep a distance
far far away from me
I don’t’ want to be disrupt
Whatever you do just don’t look at me

Chorus :
Don’t look at me
Don’t Don’t look at me
Don’t look at me
Don’t Don’t look at me
Don’t look at me
Don’t Don’t look at me
Don’t look at me
Don’t Don’t look at me

Verse:
You can’t see me
I can’t see you
No matter what you do
Don’t drag me with you

Chorus :
Don’t look at me
Don’t Don’t look at me
Don’t look at me
Don’t Don’t look at me
Don’t look at me
Don’t Don’t look at me
Don’t look at me
Don’t Don’t look at me

Music ~~~~

Verse:
I know I am perfect
you are jealous of me
go somewhere else
don’t want to see you
Please keep a distance
far far away from me
I don’t’ want to be disrupt
Whatever you do just don’t look at me

Don’t look     at me
Don’t look     at me
Don’t look     at me
Don’t    Look    At    Me

Susan’s Live Draft 2

The reading taught me how to set the tempo and how to edit the audio. I will have the vocal in  the final.

Susan’s Live Draft 1

I never used Ableton Live before this is my first time. The reading taught me how to use Ableton Live. I learn how to use the clips, the layout of Ableton Live, how to use the tracks properly, know the difference between a MIDI track and an audio track. Know how to arrange tracks. The song that I wrote is a little Egyptian style.

Susan’s Logic Final

So I change some stuff compare to my 1st and 2nd draft and it is a little long than my draft. I had some and little echo in my voice and I use EQ to help smooth my voice. The reading helped me through the process of automation, compression and EQ. In this piece there are serval different beats that are input into the song same thing as bass. I also added some shakers so it doesn’t sound too dull. This song is in Chinese

 

Here is the lyrics:

Intro:

你的世界會跟我的世界一樣嗎?
Will your world be the same as mine?
你看到的世界是什麼樣的世界?
What kind of world do you see?
現在我就來告訴你我看到的世界
Now let me tell you what I see in my world

Verse:

現在的世界好可怕
The world right now is scary
有戰爭有地震也有龍捲風
there is war, earthquakes and tornados
看什麼樣的世界請你告訴我
What kind of world do you want   let me know
我現在就告訴你
Right not I will tell you
我想要看到什麼樣的世界
What kind of world I would like to see

Chorus:

我看到的世界裡
In my world there is
有幸福有快樂
blessings happiness
沒有戰爭沒有災難
there is no war there is no disaster
要珍惜
be grateful
希望每天
Wishing everyday
都能和家人在一起
can be with the family togther
躺在草皮上 看星星
laying on the grass looking at the stars

我看到的世界裡
In my world there is
有幸福有快樂
blessings happiness
沒有戰爭沒有災難
there is no war there is no disaster
要珍惜
be grateful
希望每天
Wishing everyday
都能和家人在一起
can be with the family togther
躺在草皮上 看星星
laying on the grass looking at the stars

Last Verse:

不要因為自己很有錢就可以浪費
Don’t waste because you are rich
還有人比你可憐
There are people who are less fortunate than you
請你珍惜不要浪費
Please cherish and don’t waste

Susan’s 3rd Draft

Here is my 3rd draft I decide that I am going to change the whole piece….the reason I change the whole thing is because I didn’t know what kind of lyrics I would want for my 1st and 2nd draft.

Susan’s 2nd Draft

Here is my second draft. I will have the voice in my final production. The reading taught me how to mix the music in many ways to make the sound better.

Susan’s 1st Draft

The reading taught me how to use the EQ and how to make the music more smooth. It also taught me how to compress the music. I am probably going to add more instrument to my music. This is just a draft so I haven’t edit anything yet but this is about how it will sound like.

Susan’s Final Loop Project – Keep Moving Forward

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The hardest part of this project was the vocal part. It was very hard for me to add the lyrics in. I wasn’t sure what kind of lyrics I wanted. I also feel like I my melody is all over the place. It was a challenge to me. I didn’t know what kind of style of vocal I wanted….did I wanted to sing or should I say it as a narrator or should I rap? It was a difficult decision for me. The readings taught me how to mix. It was interesting how there are many variations to a track.
Anyway here is my lyrics to the song

Lyrics:

What is going on
Don’t let pressure bring you down
whatever you do
keep moving forward

If you can’t decide
Just say you don’t know
Hurry and carefully
Make your decision

Fight the pressure and move on

Don’t worry about what other says about you
Think positive forget the negative.
Look forward
you will have a brighter future

What is going on
Don’t let pressure bring you down
Whatever you do
Keep moving forward

Don’t go back
Cuz you might fall
Keep moving forward